{"id":5082,"date":"2017-04-19T14:48:03","date_gmt":"2017-04-19T14:48:03","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/?p=5082"},"modified":"2023-01-15T16:12:15","modified_gmt":"2023-01-15T16:12:15","slug":"using-eyesay-to-give-visual-feedback-on-student-essays","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/using-eyesay-to-give-visual-feedback-on-student-essays\/","title":{"rendered":"Using &#8220;EyeSay!&#8221; to give visual feedback on student essays"},"content":{"rendered":"<h1>Overview<\/h1>\n<p>&#8220;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.classtools.net\/eyesay\/\">EyeSay!<\/a>&#8221; is a new tool I have coded at <a href=\"http:\/\/www.classtools.net\">www.classtools.net<\/a> to help students and teachers get a useful visualisation of essay style and structure.<\/p>\n<p>Students simply copy and paste their essay from a word processor, and then the web application colour-codes its central stylistic features.<\/p>\n<p><strong>For students<\/strong>, it helps them develop their writing &#8211; They can use it to spot whether they are using a range of sentence lengths, quotes, dates and terminology.<\/p>\n<p><strong>For teachers<\/strong>, it is a useful marking tool &#8211; \u00a0you can use it to quickly identify whether the essay uses key evidence, linking words and statistics.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-5083\" src=\"http:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/-165\" alt=\"\" width=\"803\" height=\"645\" \/><\/p>\n<h2>Taking it further<\/h2>\n<p>It is also possible to view the essay&#8217;s opening topic sentences in isolation. If these thesis statements are written well, then taken together they should provide a coherent overview of the entire\u00a0argument. If not, they should be edited further.<\/p>\n<p>The <a href=\"http:\/\/www.classtools.net\/eyesay\/\">EyeSay!<\/a> application could also be used in conjunction with the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/use-the-keyword-checker-to-ensure-student-essays-cover-the-essentials\/\">ClassTools Keyword Checker<\/a>\u00a0to help students ensure they have included specific factual knowledge in their essays.<\/p>\n<h2>Link<\/h2>\n<p>Russel Tarr, <i>EyeSay! Visualise the main features of your writing<\/i> (Available at: <a href=\"http:\/\/www.classtools.net\/eyesay\/\">http:\/\/www.classtools.net\/eyesay\/<\/a>)<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Overview &#8220;EyeSay!&#8221; is a new tool I have coded at www.classtools.net to help students and teachers get a useful visualisation of essay style and structure. Students simply copy and paste their essay from a word processor, and then the web application colour-codes its central stylistic features. For students, it helps them develop their writing &#8211; [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":5083,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[474,473],"tags":[286,592,271,593,162,594],"class_list":["bg-stuff"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5082","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=5082"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5082\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":5567,"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5082\/revisions\/5567"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/5083"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=5082"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=5082"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.classtools.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=5082"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}